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OFFICAL BATTLE RESULTS -- DEVEREAUX VS. MATILDE

Journal Entry: Wed Aug 6, 2014, 1:15 PM


Hello Peepers! Battle Results are in! Be patient as we roll more of these out in the future!

:star: The results for the official battle between Ra-ooo's Devereaux

PokePlatform: New Pumpkin on the Block by Ra-ooo

and RadicalFred's Matlide

MatildePPApp by RadicalFred

are in with the critiques and winner below!
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:star: Judge 1:

:bulletblack:Ra-ooo's entry:

Effort (25 points)
- Cleanness - 5/5
- Color Composition- 6/10
- Picture Composition 2/10

Attack Dynamics (15 points)
- Can we tell what is going on from the picture alone? - 3/5
- Are the poses dynamic or static? - 3/5
- Did you use a unique and interesting perspective? - 3/5

Creativity and Logic (20 Points)
- Does the battle portray a creative situation? - 2/10
- Is the logic that you used reasonable? (Is the situation and its outcome possible?) - 10/10

TOTAL SCORE: 34/60

:pokeball:The highlights:
-Gorgeous lines and flow especially in the affects. The Moves sweep and flow, just like the linework.
-Great form and perspective. (Great foot!) No many would be so bold to try that!

:pokeball:Room for improvement/tips:
-The body forms are great, but the overall poses fell a bit stiff. Or  their balance is off overall. Mati doesnt feel as fluid as Dev and with no real background to help fill in that weight, it looks a bit off.
-Like either you ran out of time ,rush, or was lazy in comparison to other works.



:bulletwhite: RadicalFred's entry:


Effort (25 points)
- Cleanness - 4/5
- Color Composition- 5/10
- Picture Composition 8/10


Attack Dynamics (15 points)
- Can we tell what is going on from the picture alone? - 4/5
- Are the poses dynamic or static? - 4/5
- Did you use a unique and interesting perspective? - 5/5

Creativity and Logic (20 Points)
- Does the battle portray a creative situation? - 8/10
- Is the logic that you used reasonable? (Is the situation and its outcome possible?) - 10/10

TOTAL SCORE: 48/60

:pokeball: The highlights:
- Very unique way pose!  Mati’s jump is fantastic. THere’s a lot of energy in her moves.
-bright colors. Easy to see everything, nothing’s clouded or too dark.
-That view on Dev on the bottom is super well done! Brings the focus right up to Matilde.

:pokeball:Room for improvement/tips:
-I would assume that the sky was the result of an unfortunate incident with the scanner, but it  kind of detracts from the image as a whole. Points were negligible but a good tip might be to just leave the sky uncolored or try a soft pencil instead of markers.
-Matlide is fantastic and while Dev is good on his own, I’d love to see you push yourself with giving both some action.
-Try playing with the thickness of your linework. Like closer things having thicker outlines and liner ones far away. Everything has the same thickness as the trees, it’s not much but it can help your lines pop!





:star: Judge 2 :

:bulletblack: Ra-ooo's entry:

Effort (25 points) (16)
- Cleanness - 3/5
- Color Composition-  6/10
- Picture Composition  7/10

Attack Dynamics (15 points) (10.5)
- Can we tell what is going on from the picture alone? - 4/5
- Are the poses dynamic or static? - 2.5/5
- Did you use a unique and interesting perspective? - 4/5

Creativity and Logic (20 Points)  (15)
- Does the battle portray a creative situation? - 5/10
- Is the logic that you used reasonable? (Is the situation and its outcome possible?) - 10/10

TOTAL SCORE: 41.5/60

:pokeball:The highlights:
- Your lineart is very clean! The detail on the foot is really amazing, same with the line art for Dev’s hair.
- Dev’s facial expression is great as well!
-Anatomy was very nice!

:pokeball: Tips:
- Personally, you should add a little more to the background. Anything besides just leaving it pitch black. It looks rather bland compared to your past works.
- I liked the pose given to Mati, but she looks rather stiff compared to Dev. Perhaps next time when making a character use a kicking based move, instead of making their body face completely forward, have it where maybe Dev stopped it mid turn. That way they don’t look stiff and just facing forward, there is more body movement.
-Next time for battles, I would say not to cover the opponent’s face. While you can still see that Mati was shocked, I would have liked to see the entire facial expression, rather than just cover it up.


:bulletwhite:  RadicalFred's entry:

Effort (25 points) (20)
- Cleanness - 5/5
- Color Composition- 8 /10
- Picture Composition 7 /10

Attack Dynamics (15 points) (12)
- Can we tell what is going on from the picture alone? - 4/5
- Are the poses dynamic or static? -4 /5
- Did you use a unique and interesting perspective? - 4/5

Creativity and Logic (20 Points) (16.5)
- Does the battle portray a creative situation? - 6.5/10
- Is the logic that you used reasonable? (Is the situation and its outcome possible?) - 10/10

TOTAL SCORE: 48.5/60

:pokeball:The highlights:
- The coloring looked very nice! I really loved the shading for the leaves and the fire from the Blaze Kick!
- Very nice pose for Mati !
-Lines were very clean!

:pokeball: Tips:
- It would have been nice to see more done with Dev. While it was nice seeing the pose coming from Mati, Dev was lacking severely.
-The sky looks a little rushed, maybe try going a little slower next time.





:star:Judge 3 :

:bulletblack: Ra-ooo's entry:

Effort (25 points)
- Cleanness - 5/5
- Color Composition- 9/10
- Picture Composition 2/10

Attack Dynamics (15 points)
- Can we tell what is going on from the picture alone? - 3/5
- Are the poses dynamic or static? - 2/5
- Did you use a unique and interesting perspective? - 2/5

Creativity and Logic (20 Points)
- Does the battle portray a creative situation? - 1/10
- Is the logic that you used reasonable? (Is the situation and its outcome possible?) - 10/10

TOTAL SCORE: 34/60

The highlights:
-Good use of highlights & lowlights- though don’t forget, fire creates a light source too
-Dev’s devious little grin makes a nice point of interest
-Very clean linework and coloring
Room for improvement/tips:
-There is no background of any kind. Don’t forget to pay attention to the whole image, a background can make or break an image.
-Push your poses. You’ve shown capability of interesting poses, but these are rather static.
-Don’t forget that fire is also a light source- adding dramatic lighting from the fire could’ve made your image pop.


:bulletwhite: RadicalFred's entry:

Effort (25 points)
- Cleanness - 4/5
- Color Composition- 6/10
- Picture Composition 10/10

Attack Dynamics (15 points)
- Can we tell what is going on from the picture alone? - 4/5
- Are the poses dynamic or static? - 4/5
- Did you use a unique and interesting perspective? - 5/5

Creativity and Logic (20 Points)
- Does the battle portray a creative situation? - 7/10
- Is the logic that you used reasonable? (Is the situation and its outcome possible?) - 10/10

TOTAL SCORE: 50/60

:pokeball:The highlights:
-Nice use of perspective- worm’s eye view is an ambitious shot
-Matilde’s pose is really dynamic, and her expression is fit for battle
-Sweet fire effect! It makes her attack pop and adds interest to the image

:pokeball:Room for improvement/tips:
-Try to use the environment, how are the battlers interacting with the area they’re fighting in? Are they using it to their advantage?
-Most of the image was clean and polished, but the sky seems rushed in comparison to the rest. Pay attention to the whole image and how your media functions.
-There’s not much going on with Dev. His portrayal is logical, but you could’ve gone farther with it. Think of all the different ways you can depict him- try multiple poses, vary how much he comes off the ground, explore the possibilities, and choose the most interesting.







:star: And the winner iiiiissss... RadicalFred! :star:

MatildePPApp by RadicalFred

Congratulations! You're awarded with two official battle points!

Keep it up, combatants!

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Wan-Wan-Tan Featured By Owner 4 days ago  Hobbyist Digital Artist
hello friends~
with school now on the rise and a hectic schedule ahead if me, i cant seem to find the time to rp or draw like i want to. im not willing to leave this group, but i dont have the time to juggle homework, college applications, and other group activity at the same time. (plus, havent been feeling inspired to rp or draw hotaru lately orz;;; ) until i can figure everything out, would it be alright for me to go into hiatus for a while? i would greatly appreciate a break, but i dont want to leave this group either!! ill let you know when i come back~
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Arfial Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2014  Student Digital Artist
I resent the BC thank you for sending me the original information.
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Arfial Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2014  Student Digital Artist
hello I submitted my join request and its still in the approval stage for 2 days now.
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MysticForest44 Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2014  Student General Artist
Sooo... My one-hour late (I think... I'm on a different time zone) battlecard got rejected? T^T
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MysticForest44 Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2014  Student General Artist
Sooo... I'm already a member? Haha, I'm not even aware... :|
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